the zoo keeper

2 Responses to the zoo keeper

1. Mahith says:

   November 23, 2014 at 7:42 am

   Good job. You could use more high level vocabulary.
2. vgutmann says:

   November 23, 2014 at 4:30 pm

   Good alliteration at the beginning. Go through and see if you can edit your story. Take out any information that is not vital to the story and add some detail and description.

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