rEMEMBER by holly

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2 Responses to rEMEMBER by holly

  1. swheller says:

    Hi Holly
    Lovely poem – you really thought about the meaning throughout. Look at the word there and see if it should read their instead. Also look at line four and read read it , does it make sense?
    Mrs. Wheller

  2. Anonymous says:

    What a beautiful poem Holly, well done! Make sure you put a comma between Remember, remember and no capital letter on the second remember.

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