A really good effort for your first attempt at writing a blog, well done – look at the sentence starting with and and see if you can improve it. Next time you could add some detail about what sort of game Portal 3 is about – I don’t have a clue!
Mrs. Wheller
A very good first effort. I love your use of speech and speech marks. Don’t forget commas and full stops at the end of the speech and start a new line for each person speaking.
A really good effort for your first attempt at writing a blog, well done – look at the sentence starting with and and see if you can improve it. Next time you could add some detail about what sort of game Portal 3 is about – I don’t have a clue!
Mrs. Wheller
A very good first effort. I love your use of speech and speech marks. Don’t forget commas and full stops at the end of the speech and start a new line for each person speaking.
well done arnus that really made me laugh