porky pine

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4 Responses to porky pine

  1. Anonymous says:

    Well done girls, I like the use of hideous and surprised. Some spelling mistakes, boat and their. Also read through as some parts don’t make sense.

  2. vgutmann says:

    Well done girls. I like your use of horrendous and surprised. Some spelling mistakes, boat and their. Also reread and correct some of the parts that don’t quite make sense.

  3. robem says:

    Were so sorry about our mistakes we was in a rush to get finished because about ten minutes we only did 30 words so sorry

  4. smitt says:

    Good use of speech

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