A fantastic story opening Chelsea with some great description especially the use of ‘ly’ words. Remember capital letters at the beginning of every sentence, there should also be a comma at the end of the drop in clause, e.g. They gently lifted the kangaroo, it was cold and it shivered, the children…
A fantastic story opening Chelsea with some great description especially the use of ‘ly’ words. Remember capital letters at the beginning of every sentence, there should also be a comma at the end of the drop in clause, e.g. They gently lifted the kangaroo, it was cold and it shivered, the children…