This is an unusual and original story. I like the way you speak to the reader. I think there’s a couple of prompt words missing, but you have made the ‘gorilla’ word into a great theme. Tip for next time – try to include some description if you can.
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This is an unusual and original story. I like the way you speak to the reader. I think there’s a couple of prompt words missing, but you have made the ‘gorilla’ word into a great theme.
Tip for next time – try to include some description if you can.