Timmy the Gorilla

Posted on November 16, 2018 by Deleted User
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  1. Michael (Team 100wc) says:
    November 18, 2018 at 5:11 pm

    Hi Luke,
    Great Story! I liked the way you introduced the world at the beginning “a world of imagination and happiness”. Well done on using a simile “running like cheetah”. It’s a shame Jeff got hurt. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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