Me My Family and I

3 Responses to Me My Family and I

1. spenm says:

   September 7, 2018 at 10:26 am

   good i like the suspence were she has like kida a flashback.
2. phaylock says:

   September 13, 2018 at 9:35 am

   Great account and use of the prompt Janet. Next week use commas to show your readers when to make mini pauses.
3. bryag1 says:

   September 14, 2018 at 9:34 am

   this is a great story about a family

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