I really enjoyed that Megan, very well written and great description. With speech, start a new line and use a capital letter. E.g.
The zombie said,
“Please don’t hurt me I mean no harm, I came to you to ask if you would like to come to my grave-yard home. I need help picking how to decorate my home. I have lived at this house for years but what colour should it be? I thought you guys will be great at giving me some good advice.”
Wow, great 100 WC I love it!!!
I really enjoyed that Megan, very well written and great description. With speech, start a new line and use a capital letter. E.g.
The zombie said,
“Please don’t hurt me I mean no harm, I came to you to ask if you would like to come to my grave-yard home. I need help picking how to decorate my home. I have lived at this house for years but what colour should it be? I thought you guys will be great at giving me some good advice.”