Hi Bobby,
You have included some excellent words in your writing. Colossal is an amazing adjective for the wave. You built the tension in the story up well – but I can’t help notice that you seem to have missed out the sentence needed for this weeks prompt?
Keep up the descriptive writing.
Mrs Horan (Team 100WC) Morrinsville, New Zealand
Hi Bobby,
You have included some excellent words in your writing. Colossal is an amazing adjective for the wave. You built the tension in the story up well – but I can’t help notice that you seem to have missed out the sentence needed for this weeks prompt?
Keep up the descriptive writing.
Mrs Horan (Team 100WC) Morrinsville, New Zealand
Great use of language Bobby, I enjoyed reading your writing but make sure you use the prompt.