haunted house

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  1. swheller says:

    Well done Josh – looking good! Remember if using a vowel such as a,e, i,o,u you normally write an rather that a therefore it would have read an old man.Also you wrote a gruesome fake bodies rather than gruesome fake bodies…..but mostly a good 100WC
    Mrs Wheller

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