Hi Nachm! Thank you for taking the time to post on the 100WC. You used some brilliantly precise language and have a good turn of phrase. Make sure you reread your post before you hit submit, as you missed some punctuation which would have made your longer sentences make sense. Your final sentence is very good, especially the ‘packed lightly’ and ‘silence of the early morning’ gives the reader the ominous sense of mystery. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your posts for the 100WC in the future.
Mrs. T. Wiltshire UK, Team100
Hi Nachm! Thank you for taking the time to post on the 100WC. You used some brilliantly precise language and have a good turn of phrase. Make sure you reread your post before you hit submit, as you missed some punctuation which would have made your longer sentences make sense. Your final sentence is very good, especially the ‘packed lightly’ and ‘silence of the early morning’ gives the reader the ominous sense of mystery. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your posts for the 100WC in the future.
Mrs. T. Wiltshire UK, Team100