Hi Alicia, I really like your story it gives me creeps! Did you know i wrote a kind of creepy story. one thing i think you can work on is, punctuation in some spots you have a comma were there should be a period one thing i like was your word choices! keep up the great work.
Hi brana I liked your story my sister has a ruby coat next time you can make your story’s have more time go buy
but overall good gob on your story
Hi Alicia, I really like your story it gives me creeps! Did you know i wrote a kind of creepy story. one thing i think you can work on is, punctuation in some spots you have a comma were there should be a period one thing i like was your word choices! keep up the great work.
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