You did a fantastic job on this 100 word challenge! You used some advanced words that described the scene so that I could visualize and hear what was happening. That was excellent writing, and I love how you wrote the “menacing vehicle” and the “discreet hand” because the phrases are interesting and complex. Keep up the wonderful work!
Great job responding to this week’s 100wc picture prompt! What a creative and descriptive tale you created. Once again, nice job.
You did a fantastic job on this 100 word challenge! You used some advanced words that described the scene so that I could visualize and hear what was happening. That was excellent writing, and I love how you wrote the “menacing vehicle” and the “discreet hand” because the phrases are interesting and complex. Keep up the wonderful work!
I really enjoyed this story! I really liked how you used so many great adjectives! I also like how this story made a dramatic turn. Nice job!
I LOVED this story. I really enjoyed your vocabulary and your plot.