Hi Alicia,
I enjoyed your story which contained lots of great description. I can visualise Mr Bananas sitting at his desk and getting angry over an unwelcome email. I did get a bit confused at the end when you used ‘he’ to refer to two different people in the same sentence, but I worked out why Mr B hated his former boss. Ouch!
Hi Alicia,
I enjoyed your story which contained lots of great description. I can visualise Mr Bananas sitting at his desk and getting angry over an unwelcome email. I did get a bit confused at the end when you used ‘he’ to refer to two different people in the same sentence, but I worked out why Mr B hated his former boss. Ouch!
Hi Alicia your story was really funny and I really liked it. From Farjana