Philip, The Big Fight has intensity and energy moving through it from beginning to end. The panic that sets in at the end wasn’t what I expected as people are then in danger. Your simile of the sun like an all seeing eye adds great description as well as “the last trickle of people” entering the stadium. You’ve given me words to imagine the next time I attend an event at a stadium. Thank you for writing!
Philip, The Big Fight has intensity and energy moving through it from beginning to end. The panic that sets in at the end wasn’t what I expected as people are then in danger. Your simile of the sun like an all seeing eye adds great description as well as “the last trickle of people” entering the stadium. You’ve given me words to imagine the next time I attend an event at a stadium. Thank you for writing!
Mrs. Peterson
Team 100wc
Texas, USA