Well done for using all the words and creating a story that is interesting and makes sense. I love your opening complex sentence which is punctuated perfectly. Punctuation went a bit downhill from there though! No full stop is required after future and you should not start a new sentence with ‘but’ or ‘or’.
Well done for using all the words and creating a story that is interesting and makes sense. I love your opening complex sentence which is punctuated perfectly. Punctuation went a bit downhill from there though! No full stop is required after future and you should not start a new sentence with ‘but’ or ‘or’.