the battery powered sandwich

Posted on December 1, 2017 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to the battery powered sandwich

  1. Emma says:
    December 1, 2017 at 2:23 pm

    Dear Mia,
    I love your creative story about robots and I love your vivid adjectives! However, if you mentioned the time and place your story would be over the roof.-Emma

  2. Steven Hales says:
    December 3, 2017 at 5:37 pm

    OK, Mia, when I walk through the town next time, I will be careful to avoid any walking sandwiches. You write well with interesting vocabulary, good grammar and punctuation!
    Top marks for Year 6 writing!
    Steven Hales – Stiffkey, Norfolk, England, UK – #Team100wc

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