Well done on your writing Vickl
It isn’t easy to write a story in only 100 words but you managed very well.
Brilliant start to your story, you really grabbed my attention. Great story, really engaging and interesting. My one negative point is that I didn’t understanding the ending, which is a pity as I really wanted to find out what happened.
Looking forward to reading your writing in the future,
Keep up the good work !
Well done on your writing Vickl
It isn’t easy to write a story in only 100 words but you managed very well.
Brilliant start to your story, you really grabbed my attention. Great story, really engaging and interesting. My one negative point is that I didn’t understanding the ending, which is a pity as I really wanted to find out what happened.
Looking forward to reading your writing in the future,
Keep up the good work !
Shane, Teacher
Dublin, Ireland
(Team 100)