What an exciting adventure Rayan! All science fiction stories should have new words for things, like ‘Triberium’ (I wonder what that is?). Oh, and for their characters too – ‘Kane Wrath’ … like it! Now, I wonder who “we” is in your story …?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
What an exciting adventure Rayan! All science fiction stories should have new words for things, like ‘Triberium’ (I wonder what that is?). Oh, and for their characters too – ‘Kane Wrath’ … like it! Now, I wonder who “we” is in your story …?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
I like the ellitaration marks that you used are in the right place. Good job