Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week, I really enjoyed reading it. I like that you opened with speech, it is such a strong way to begin your writing and hooks your readers straight away. I also thought that you had a clear structure to you story and used the prompt really well.
I’m going to recommend your entry for the showcase this week, so good luck!
Keep writing and sharing! 🙂
I like the way you used brackets for extra information;)
Hi Abigail,
Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week, I really enjoyed reading it. I like that you opened with speech, it is such a strong way to begin your writing and hooks your readers straight away. I also thought that you had a clear structure to you story and used the prompt really well.
I’m going to recommend your entry for the showcase this week, so good luck!
Keep writing and sharing! 🙂
Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
Wirral, UK.