Goose bumps invasion of the ghosts

2 Responses to Goose bumps invasion of the ghosts

1. Miss D says:

   November 11, 2017 at 5:35 pm

   Fantastic writing but remember capital I
2. smitd says:

   November 17, 2017 at 10:03 am

   Too many ellipses at the end and “the familiar ugly I saw a ghost floating midway-” doesn’t make sense. Other than those two mistakes, it was good..

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