Very nice story, I love seeing people’s stories around the world. I’m Carly and I live in the USA, I’m in 6th grade and it’s very interesting to see stories from people in other places. I think it’s cool that people have different word chose from all around the world!
What an interesting end to your story.Gone where ? Have you faded away , like the people on the train
`People started to fade away, like a rainbow on a wintery evening `, is a brilliant sentence, I love that simile.Well done .
Carol.
Team 100wc.
England
Very nice story, I love seeing people’s stories around the world. I’m Carly and I live in the USA, I’m in 6th grade and it’s very interesting to see stories from people in other places. I think it’s cool that people have different word chose from all around the world!
What an interesting end to your story.Gone where ? Have you faded away , like the people on the train
`People started to fade away, like a rainbow on a wintery evening `, is a brilliant sentence, I love that simile.Well done .
Carol.
Team 100wc.
England