Wow, I absolutely loved your writing! I like the phrases, “as the flames died out in the open fire,” and “my almost white poodle, Rufus.” I love your creativity in the way that you wrote “candy floss stands.” Your writing is wonderful, with all of the descriptive adjectives and reasons why fireworks day is your dream holiday. Keep it up!
Wow, I absolutely loved your writing! I like the phrases, “as the flames died out in the open fire,” and “my almost white poodle, Rufus.” I love your creativity in the way that you wrote “candy floss stands.” Your writing is wonderful in the way that you used descriptive adjectives and included reasons why fireworks night is your dream holiday. Great use of those 5 100 word challenge words! Keep it up!
Hi Aimee – thank you for taking the time to post on the 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed your description of your poodle and the clever use of ‘practically’ and ‘absolutely’. It sounds like a lot of work to bath your dog every week! You set the scene well too, for the celebrations around fireworks night and you gave your reader a lovely image in their heads. Well done!
Mrs. T. Wiltshire UK (100 Word Challenge Team)
Wow, I absolutely loved your writing! I like the phrases, “as the flames died out in the open fire,” and “my almost white poodle, Rufus.” I love your creativity in the way that you wrote “candy floss stands.” Your writing is wonderful, with all of the descriptive adjectives and reasons why fireworks day is your dream holiday. Keep it up!
Wow, I absolutely loved your writing! I like the phrases, “as the flames died out in the open fire,” and “my almost white poodle, Rufus.” I love your creativity in the way that you wrote “candy floss stands.” Your writing is wonderful in the way that you used descriptive adjectives and included reasons why fireworks night is your dream holiday. Great use of those 5 100 word challenge words! Keep it up!
Hi Aimee – thank you for taking the time to post on the 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed your description of your poodle and the clever use of ‘practically’ and ‘absolutely’. It sounds like a lot of work to bath your dog every week! You set the scene well too, for the celebrations around fireworks night and you gave your reader a lovely image in their heads. Well done!
Mrs. T. Wiltshire UK (100 Word Challenge Team)