A good opener and how exciting to train to be a spy. You certainly grabbed my attention with the dream! Remember when you are referring to yourself as ‘I’ you need to use a capital letter.
It is a very good story, I like that you based everything on “Spy Pups” it is very interesting. Try to add more adjectives, but other than that, it was very nice! -Demiyah
A good opener and how exciting to train to be a spy. You certainly grabbed my attention with the dream! Remember when you are referring to yourself as ‘I’ you need to use a capital letter.
It is a very good story, I like that you based everything on “Spy Pups” it is very interesting. Try to add more adjectives, but other than that, it was very nice! -Demiyah