Hi George,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I don’t think it was wise of Bob to play fetch with his dog in the middle of the night.
I’m hoping this is all a dream and not the start of a nightmare for Bob…
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
George,
We liked your piece. It was kind of creepy! This sounds a lot like a movie trailer we just saw. You could make this even more dramatic by adding some pauses and more sensory details to your writing. Will there be a continuation of this story at any time? We can’t wait to read more of your work!
Hi George,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I don’t think it was wise of Bob to play fetch with his dog in the middle of the night.
I’m hoping this is all a dream and not the start of a nightmare for Bob…
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
George,
We liked your piece. It was kind of creepy! This sounds a lot like a movie trailer we just saw. You could make this even more dramatic by adding some pauses and more sensory details to your writing. Will there be a continuation of this story at any time? We can’t wait to read more of your work!