Otabo,
I loved your raping,
It’s so cool maybe you could teach me!
Suggestion: maybe, add a few commas so I can take a breath.
It was still really cool.
I’m really interested on what comes next where you say “I turned my home into”
Please continue raping you have a great rap chance.
Punctuation Luta! It is very difficult to read if you don’t show me when to pause and breath.
Very hard to read I need a breath but nice rap
Otabo,
I loved your raping,
It’s so cool maybe you could teach me!
Suggestion: maybe, add a few commas so I can take a breath.
It was still really cool.
I’m really interested on what comes next where you say “I turned my home into”
Please continue raping you have a great rap chance.
Great wrap Luta
nice rap luta otabor but you need some commas so we know where to pause