It’s annoying when people will not leave you alone isn’t it. Your work had a nice structure to it. Remember to take care with capital letters. Can you spot any that need correcting?
Mr. M. (Team 100WC)
Cambs, UK.
Barter,
Your story is really interesting! Does that really happen where you live? I wonder how better it could be if you put even more adjectives in it. Your story was had a good amount of sentence variety which I really like.
It’s annoying when people will not leave you alone isn’t it. Your work had a nice structure to it. Remember to take care with capital letters. Can you spot any that need correcting?
Mr. M. (Team 100WC)
Cambs, UK.
Barter,
Your story is really interesting! Does that really happen where you live? I wonder how better it could be if you put even more adjectives in it. Your story was had a good amount of sentence variety which I really like.