Milla,
I really like your idea of switching humans with dogs and dogs into humans, because I have done that in a story. I really think it would be better if you put more periods instead of commas because you will pause during each period. What would he do with the glasses? I really want to know what happens next I really hope to read more of your writing.
Milla,
I really like your idea of switching humans with dogs and dogs into humans, because I have done that in a story. I really think it would be better if you put more periods instead of commas because you will pause during each period. What would he do with the glasses? I really want to know what happens next I really hope to read more of your writing.