Hi Alicia
I really enjoyed reading this hundred word challenge. I especially like the way you set up all of the characters and set the scene. And what a great cliffhanger you left us with. I’m now left wondering was it a big bad crocodile and what trouble could it cause for the submarine. Well done! Great writing for the hundred word challenge.
Ms O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
Galway Ireland
Hi Alicia
I really enjoyed reading this hundred word challenge. I especially like the way you set up all of the characters and set the scene. And what a great cliffhanger you left us with. I’m now left wondering was it a big bad crocodile and what trouble could it cause for the submarine. Well done! Great writing for the hundred word challenge.
Ms O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
Galway Ireland