Burglar alert

Posted on September 22, 2017 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Burglar alert

  1. Mrs. Ray in Illinois says:
    September 23, 2017 at 2:03 pm

    Hi Jonej!
    I enjoyed reading your piece! Thanks for sharing your writing with the world!
    I like the idea of your story. It had a clear beginning, middle and end and was thought out. Also, good comma usage.
    In the future, I would recommend adding more depth and details to your story so that it is 100 words.
    HAPPY writing!
    Mrs. Ray in Illinois -Team 100WC

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