bucket crash

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  1. Emma Tyler says:

    Hi Parkj1! Thank you for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge. Just as well the helicopter was in air ambulance! I can see that you were working really hard on using adjectives and adverbs to describe in more detail. They made your writing much more interesting for the reader. Well done!
    Emma Tyler
    100 Word Challenge Team
    England

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