Hi Rayan.
Great mysterious 100 word challenge!! I love your opening sentence “The world wide inspectors were on an investigation” – this drew me in and I wanted to find out what they were investigating. But of course you left your writing on a very clever cliffhanger and I’ll be forever wondering now what was in that suitcase they found. Well done. Great writing. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work here on the 100 word challenge,
Ms O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
Kinvara Galway Ireland
Hi Rayan.
Great mysterious 100 word challenge!! I love your opening sentence “The world wide inspectors were on an investigation” – this drew me in and I wanted to find out what they were investigating. But of course you left your writing on a very clever cliffhanger and I’ll be forever wondering now what was in that suitcase they found. Well done. Great writing. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work here on the 100 word challenge,
Ms O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
Kinvara Galway Ireland