Well done Ruby, a great use of the prompt which your writing built up to. It certainly makes me want to read on and find out if there is actually anything there. Just a spelling tip for next time:
you have written an inventive response to the prompt. You have done well to build tension with your descriptions e.g., ‘a faint noise..’ and I think you girls were really brave to carry on walking towards the river – leaving the reader wanting to know what happens next.
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Well done Ruby, a great use of the prompt which your writing built up to. It certainly makes me want to read on and find out if there is actually anything there. Just a spelling tip for next time:
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Hi Ruby,
you have written an inventive response to the prompt. You have done well to build tension with your descriptions e.g., ‘a faint noise..’ and I think you girls were really brave to carry on walking towards the river – leaving the reader wanting to know what happens next.
Well done.
MrP.
Team 100WC
Bury, UK