Some great word choices this week Jaxon, I particularly like ‘treacherous’. Your writing makes me want to read on and find out more which is very good. Well done.
Hi Jaxon,
What an interesting piece of writing! The vocabulary that you have used has created a very good out-of-this-world setting in my mind. I wonder where this story would take us next?
Thank you for sharing your writing on the 100wc.
Some great word choices this week Jaxon, I particularly like ‘treacherous’. Your writing makes me want to read on and find out more which is very good. Well done.
Hi Jaxon,
What an interesting piece of writing! The vocabulary that you have used has created a very good out-of-this-world setting in my mind. I wonder where this story would take us next?
Thank you for sharing your writing on the 100wc.
Mr Rockey, Team 100 UK