Brazil sounds like a good trip for a frog girls. They could stay in the rainforest and meet all other types of frog! Couple of things for next week. Make sure you remember to use capital letters when you type, just as you do when you write. Also, you would use ‘they were’ rather than ‘was’. You only use was for one person or thing. Eg I was, she was, Lillie was.
Well done, girls.
You have some interesting ideas here and lots happening! Your writing is clear although haven’t always got punctuation in the right places.
Make sure you take time to read and check through your writing and use another reader to test it out too. Also, perhaps try not to have too much happening in a short piece of writing
Brazil sounds like a good trip for a frog girls. They could stay in the rainforest and meet all other types of frog! Couple of things for next week. Make sure you remember to use capital letters when you type, just as you do when you write. Also, you would use ‘they were’ rather than ‘was’. You only use was for one person or thing. Eg I was, she was, Lillie was.
Well done on the challenge girls.
Mr Haylock
Well done, girls.
You have some interesting ideas here and lots happening! Your writing is clear although haven’t always got punctuation in the right places.
Make sure you take time to read and check through your writing and use another reader to test it out too. Also, perhaps try not to have too much happening in a short piece of writing
Keep up the good work!
You are so funny about you using a banana in your story love it
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