THE NEW BABY

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  1. phaylock says:

    Well done for entering the 100WC. I’m sure the baby will be fine as some babies are often born looking slightly yellow. Unless the yellow was a ‘Simpson’s’ yellow!

    Next time decide whether you want to write in the present or past tense. Your writing should be written in the same tense. Past is easier in my opinion. Also make sure I is written as a capital and ‘it is = it’s – with an apostrophe to show a letter is missing.

    Mr Haylock

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