Great idea to write a book blurb for the 100wc. Good use of a rhetorical question as well, it makes me more interested in reading the book. You need to correct the punctuation as there are too many commas and not enough full stops. E.g. The pink, sparkly pool, full of wonders, has a pipe for the majestic Queen horse Julie. Julie loved…
Great idea to write a book blurb for the 100wc. Good use of a rhetorical question as well, it makes me more interested in reading the book. You need to correct the punctuation as there are too many commas and not enough full stops. E.g. The pink, sparkly pool, full of wonders, has a pipe for the majestic Queen horse Julie. Julie loved…