What a great idea to write this as an advert! Great persuasive language and jingle. Could you sit with Mrs Wheller on Monday to help you to punctuate this.
Very clever! Your mock advertisement is sure to be popular with the millions of gamers out there. I also appreciated your one word title, “Sitting.” Be sure to put in periods to show the reader where to pause at the end of a complete thought. That will make your writing easier to follow.
Happy Gaming!
Ms. Rainey
California, USA
Thank you for your entry this week. I agree with the comment above about using the prompt as an advert, that is very creative. However your entry really needs punctuation so that I can properly understand what you have written.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin Ireland
What a great idea to write this as an advert! Great persuasive language and jingle. Could you sit with Mrs Wheller on Monday to help you to punctuate this.
Very clever! Your mock advertisement is sure to be popular with the millions of gamers out there. I also appreciated your one word title, “Sitting.” Be sure to put in periods to show the reader where to pause at the end of a complete thought. That will make your writing easier to follow.
Happy Gaming!
Ms. Rainey
California, USA
Thank you for your entry this week. I agree with the comment above about using the prompt as an advert, that is very creative. However your entry really needs punctuation so that I can properly understand what you have written.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin Ireland