Hi Mia. Well done, this is a great 100WC and you have used the prompt really well. I especially like the sentence “……sped round the corner like wild animals out of control”. Don’t forget to proof-read your work when you’ve finished, to catch any spelling or punctuation errors.
Some great description Mia. I love your use of ‘pitch black’ and ‘sleek’. I also like your simile. Punctuation goes a little bit out of the window near the end. It might be a good idea to get a friend to proof read your work before you publish and then you can do the same for them.
Hi Mia. Well done, this is a great 100WC and you have used the prompt really well. I especially like the sentence “……sped round the corner like wild animals out of control”. Don’t forget to proof-read your work when you’ve finished, to catch any spelling or punctuation errors.
Some great description Mia. I love your use of ‘pitch black’ and ‘sleek’. I also like your simile. Punctuation goes a little bit out of the window near the end. It might be a good idea to get a friend to proof read your work before you publish and then you can do the same for them.
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Hi Mia fantastic description
hi Mia great piece of writing
hi Mia really good piece of writing
from holly
yay Mia