Lovely cliff hanger at the end with an ellipsis, I also like your use of commas. They are mostly correct but I think you should have used a full stop after destination and started a new sentence. Well done.
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Lovely cliff hanger at the end with an ellipsis, I also like your use of commas. They are mostly correct but I think you should have used a full stop after destination and started a new sentence. Well done.