Was it Mr Scurfield? I love your question at the end. You also have some good descriptive words. You have used commas well in places. Remember to put your full stop before the closing speech marks and there should be a comma before the opening speech marks.
Was it Mr Scurfield? I love your question at the end. You also have some good descriptive words. You have used commas well in places. Remember to put your full stop before the closing speech marks and there should be a comma before the opening speech marks.