daniel

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  1. vgutmann says:

    Good use of time connectives and I like the use of interrogated. You have not used any punctuation. Please separate sentences with full stops and capital letters.

  2. Georgeanne Young (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Daniel – greetings from suburban Chicago, IL USA.
    What an action packed tale this week for the 100WC! I will admit I was out of breath reading because the sentences ran together ☺ Please use some commas and periods next time.

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