A very exciting start Daniel. I would’ve liked to find out how you were going to include the prompt. Don’t forget capital letters at the beginning of every new sentence. There should be a comma after off and safety is a spelling error.
Daniel,
well done for taking partin the 100 Word Challenge. Your ideas are very good, next time be very careful with your punctuation.
Goodbye from Ireland!
Niamh Team 100
A very exciting start Daniel. I would’ve liked to find out how you were going to include the prompt. Don’t forget capital letters at the beginning of every new sentence. There should be a comma after off and safety is a spelling error.
Very interesting it would have been better if you did 100words
Excellent story keep up the good work
Daniel,
well done for taking partin the 100 Word Challenge. Your ideas are very good, next time be very careful with your punctuation.
Goodbye from Ireland!
Niamh Team 100