Well done Brooke this is excellent, I love how the gorilla’s name is Barry! -From Juicy Potato
Nice one, Brooke! I like how you included a drawing corresponding to your story. However, there are minor spelling and grammatical mistakes, i.e. I (k)new. Overall, you did a great job!
i think you are very correct it was great but the minor spelling mistake was -1 point but i did love it
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