The hand

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4 Responses to The hand

  1. Merri (team100) St. Charles, IL USA says:

    Great job responding to this week’s 100wc picture prompt! What a creative and descriptive tale you created. Once again, nice job.

  2. Ally says:

    You did a fantastic job on this 100 word challenge! You used some advanced words that described the scene so that I could visualize and hear what was happening. That was excellent writing, and I love how you wrote the “menacing vehicle” and the “discreet hand” because the phrases are interesting and complex. Keep up the wonderful work!

  3. Alice says:

    I really enjoyed this story! I really liked how you used so many great adjectives! I also like how this story made a dramatic turn. Nice job!

  4. Tyler says:

    I LOVED this story. I really enjoyed your vocabulary and your plot.

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