the hiden city

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2 Responses to the hiden city

  1. jonej says:

    Grat work tigsi!

  2. Miles says:

    I loved your use of adjectives here – you created a very vivid picture in my mind. I wondered if you’d read this back to yourself? If so, did you spot places where a full stop might perhaps have been helpful? It’s an engaging story, and I liked the way it ended on a cliffhanger.

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