Stevi,
The setting of a celebration event lends itself to lots of ideas. Your ideas are unique and special with a mysterious lost ending. Check for places to add end marks to stop and start sentences. What kind of celebration is this one? We have many in Texas that involve a swimming pool because of so many hot days!
Ooh, that was scary!
I enjoyed the conclusion.
It left me wondering, where is Ruby?
Keep up the good work,
Tyler
Stevi,
The setting of a celebration event lends itself to lots of ideas. Your ideas are unique and special with a mysterious lost ending. Check for places to add end marks to stop and start sentences. What kind of celebration is this one? We have many in Texas that involve a swimming pool because of so many hot days!
Mrs. Peterson
Team 100wc
Texas, USA