Wow, you clearly have an amazing imagination. What creative ideas you have. I like the description you gave of the robot, it painted a picture in the reader’s mind of a very fat and funny looking robot. To make your writing even more enjoyable for the reader make sure you pay close attention to punctuation, it is much easier to read if the full stops and capital letters are correct. Keep up the good work.
Clare White, team 100wc, New Zealand
Wow, you clearly have an amazing imagination. What creative ideas you have. I like the description you gave of the robot, it painted a picture in the reader’s mind of a very fat and funny looking robot. To make your writing even more enjoyable for the reader make sure you pay close attention to punctuation, it is much easier to read if the full stops and capital letters are correct. Keep up the good work.
Clare White, team 100wc, New Zealand