Great description boys, lots of adjectives for how Pebbles looks and adverbs like ‘quickly’ really show me how he can run. Next time think about apostrophes for possession. You know you need apostrophes for missing letters (he’s, don’t) but when something belongs to someone you also need an apostrophe. (someone’s house – the house belongs to someone)
Jack’s pen, Vinnie’s football for example.
Great description boys, lots of adjectives for how Pebbles looks and adverbs like ‘quickly’ really show me how he can run. Next time think about apostrophes for possession. You know you need apostrophes for missing letters (he’s, don’t) but when something belongs to someone you also need an apostrophe. (someone’s house – the house belongs to someone)
Jack’s pen, Vinnie’s football for example.
Mr Haylock
Vinnie and Jack
Thank you for sharing your story with us. I really got a feel for what the fish looked like and how he moved.
Try to Make sure your alignment is together before you publish as this will help the reader follow the sentences.
I would love to hear the pineapple song one day, maybe you could write out the lyrics.
Well done keep at it boys,
Mrs DW Team 100